1、审题不清，抓不住要素，东拉西扯；
2、单词拼写错误：frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite color:#333333;text-indent:0px;background-color:#FFFFFF;">3、动词缺失：Eg: I happy I can go to Peking.
4、前后不同（数、人称、时态、主谓不同等）
eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest.
5、中式英语（Chinglish）：Eg: I very like sports.
6、综合性错误：单词大小写、标点符号与形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。
中考英语高分作文的特征1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，飞速引入主题；
2、段与段之间，自然过渡，有适合的连接词；
3、句与句之间，有适合的连接词，使之自然成一体；
4、全文中同一个意思，基本没重复用某一个词、短语或者句型等；
5、可以适合用谚语、格言等给文章添彩；
6、分段合理，全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师比较容易就能找到作文所需要写的要素和要紧句子；
7、首尾呼应，自然成一体；
8、用了很多的高级词语和句型。阅卷老师一看就了解这个同学的功底非与众不同，自然就给打高分了；
9、字数达标，要素齐全；
10、书写工整，卷面整洁，少有涂改痕迹。
中考英语高分作文的写作要素1、依据实质状况，在文章当中交叉用长短句；
2、综合用各种所谓的“高级”结构；
3、适合选择适合的连词来表示文中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，防止重复和单调；
4、在合适的语境当中，在自己十分有把握的状况下，用名言警句来增加文章的色彩；
5、不鼓励原创的语言，尽可能用平常老师批改过的，教程中有些，自己十分熟知和有把握的语言；
6、文章字数需要达标，要素要写齐全；
7、书写工整，卷面整洁，尽可能防止涂改；
8、考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要达成审题，列提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答卷卡上。
怎么样逐步培养和提高英语写作能力？（1）词语短语：词语是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的基础和源泉。
1. 词语的巧妙记忆（children; believe…)；
2. 加大中考考试大纲词语、短语的听默写；
3. 坚持课外阅读，并用“积累”本采集高频词语、短语、佳句，加大记忆；
4. 多用“高档”的词语。
Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in
I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
=gets in the way of
= have a bad influence on
（2）句子：词不离句，完整、准确、新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好文章必须具备的条件。
“多样”的句式变换
1）合并为简单句；
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
= I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
2）掌握用感叹句；
Eg: It is necessary to help others.
= How necessary it is to help others！
3) 善用复合句；
Eg: a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble.
= We need to help the people who are in trouble.
b. We know that more and more students like pop songs.
= As we all know, more and more students like pop songs.
4）巧妙用强调句；
Eg: We can achieve our dreams by working hard.
= only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams.
5) 积累丰富的谚语 训练对学生有好处
（未用谚语）It is good for us students to take exercise.
（用谚语）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
2) 集中注意力于学习
（未用谚语）We should concentrate our mind on our studies.
（用谚语）As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.”
其他谚语:
1. Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。
2. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。
4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。
5. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，疾病离得远远的我。
6. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。
7. Every coin has two sides. 任何事都有两面性。
8. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
（3）篇章：词不离句，句不离篇。可以灵活自如地运用所学的词语、短语、句型、语法，谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是练习写作的最后目的。
怎么样运用已有些“遣词造句”能力在写作实践中掌握“谋篇布局”，“百战百胜”呢？
作文常用连接词汇►转折：but, yet, however, though, although
►时间、顺序：first , second, next, and, then, after that, finally
firstly, secondly, finally
at the same time, from now on, in the end, at last
►递进：besides, also, in addition, also, not only...but also, what’s more
►讲解：in other words, or, that is
作文常用词汇►因果：because, because of, therefore, so, as a result, thus
►例举：such as, like, for example, and so on
►一定：of course, certainly
►对照：instead, instead of, on the contrary...
►总结：Generally speaking...
To tell you the truth...
Believe it or not...
All in all...
In a word ...
On the whole...
For these reasons...
That is why ...
As we all know... = As is known to us ...
►转化话题：In my opinion...
In fact...
By the way...
I am afraid...
